Rahel Shah

Thanks for giving a review. I like your eagle eyes. It is my first time writing a novel so I am not good at choosing a good choice of words. ...

This is just the beginning of a story. Anyway thanks for giving a review.

Thanks for giving a review. It really helped me a lot. I put some changes in the story just like you said. I deleted the information about the girl with ...

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